Watcha think of my song so far?!
Question: This is my first song so here it goes:
Verse 1:
Those eyes, those eyes
Those hypnotizin' eyes
Yeah, they caught me
in a trance
Those lips
That smile
That make me sticka around
For some time
Now we're talkin true romance
Bridge:
Yeah, he grabs my hand
And he has no intention
Of lettin' me go
This love
This love
I think im gonna
explode, explode, explode
Chorus:
Oh, no
Oh, no
I think in over my head
Oh, no
Oh, no
I think's he said
I love you
I love you
No turnin' back
He's got me trapped
...
And so that's the end of my song so far. I'm comin up with the rest later. It's supposed to be a raspy song, like with a little attitude in it. Any suggestions? And waht do ya think?
Answers: This is my first song so here it goes:
Verse 1:
Those eyes, those eyes
Those hypnotizin' eyes
Yeah, they caught me
in a trance
Those lips
That smile
That make me sticka around
For some time
Now we're talkin true romance
Bridge:
Yeah, he grabs my hand
And he has no intention
Of lettin' me go
This love
This love
I think im gonna
explode, explode, explode
Chorus:
Oh, no
Oh, no
I think in over my head
Oh, no
Oh, no
I think's he said
I love you
I love you
No turnin' back
He's got me trapped
...
And so that's the end of my song so far. I'm comin up with the rest later. It's supposed to be a raspy song, like with a little attitude in it. Any suggestions? And waht do ya think?
its good nice topic but you should make it maybe a little more ryming and maybe sayhow u 2 met and stuff
It's very good i like the Oh no part!! i can't really suggest anything because that would ruin the idea of originality, but it is good.