What do you think of my very first song ive ever wrote/made?!


Question: Its my very first song ive ever wrote and made.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXjGQ9DyR...

rate it from 1-10 (and you can go over 10 if you want to)


Answers: Its my very first song ive ever wrote and made.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXjGQ9DyR...

rate it from 1-10 (and you can go over 10 if you want to)

hey BABE your pretty much an musician i think it was really good you should make more and put them up so i can hear them!!!:)))))))))) talk to you later SWEETIE!!! p.s what happened wit that girl??? i gave you my email i think ragingwinds93@yahoo.com if she said no you can do better:)) 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,... it rocked ;)

8

WHOA!
Thats really good!
Ur really talented!
I rate it a...
93812657834657647362785647563782654317...
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Great Job!

8. I like it, but it seems very repetitive. My suggestion would be to set that down, almost as a beat, and then add some sort of melody or something. But still pretty cool.

10, if u want to sell to PlayStation, Nintendo or Xbox.

It kind of reminds me of Party Boy from Jackass. Its really catchy. I think you have a good start. The problem I have with it is that it a little too redundant. Try and vary it a little bit and add a build up. Take us on a roller coaster ride!

For now, I rate it: 6/10. Thx for sharing.

6 or 7.

I was hoping for a change as the song went on, but it just stayed the same. The song's got potential, though.



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