Are theses lyrics good? (I wrote it)?!


Question: "Makes Me Wonder"
Verse 1:
I like,
the way you make jokes
The way,
I feel like I'll have a stroke
The way,
your eyes twinkle in light
I know,
I'm coming to my plight
I love,
the way you make me smile
How I,
feel like such a child
Is this,
only a crush
Am I,
thinking about too much?

Pre-Chorus:

I don't know...
But you know I like you...
Yea, you know I like you

Chorus:
It makes me wonder,
if you like me (yea)
It makes me wonder,
if we are meant to be
It makes me cry,
Are you my guy?
It's making me wonder,
Oh, how I hate to wonder
You're making me feel like,
I shouldn't wonder
But still I wonder

Verse 2:
I feel,
that I can't talk to you
too nervous,
to even speak to you
I don't know,
when this feeling will end
I guess,
It just depends
Does a smile,
mean anything?
Why do your "Hi"s,
Make me wanna scream?
Is this,
making me crazy
I guess,
I just wanna be your lady


Pre-chorus:
I don't know...
But you know I like you...
Yea, you know I like you...

Chorus x 1


Answers: "Makes Me Wonder"
Verse 1:
I like,
the way you make jokes
The way,
I feel like I'll have a stroke
The way,
your eyes twinkle in light
I know,
I'm coming to my plight
I love,
the way you make me smile
How I,
feel like such a child
Is this,
only a crush
Am I,
thinking about too much?

Pre-Chorus:

I don't know...
But you know I like you...
Yea, you know I like you

Chorus:
It makes me wonder,
if you like me (yea)
It makes me wonder,
if we are meant to be
It makes me cry,
Are you my guy?
It's making me wonder,
Oh, how I hate to wonder
You're making me feel like,
I shouldn't wonder
But still I wonder

Verse 2:
I feel,
that I can't talk to you
too nervous,
to even speak to you
I don't know,
when this feeling will end
I guess,
It just depends
Does a smile,
mean anything?
Why do your "Hi"s,
Make me wanna scream?
Is this,
making me crazy
I guess,
I just wanna be your lady


Pre-chorus:
I don't know...
But you know I like you...
Yea, you know I like you...

Chorus x 1

I'd really have to hear it to music to give you my full opinion. However, some parts I like a lot. The song seems honest, pure, and relatable. On the other hand, it is so relatable that it seems a bit too obvious, done before, and foolish. I think that to make it great, add a little more depth and variety to some verses. Also, it may be good to slightly tweak the name of the song because when i first saw "Makes Me Wonder" I thought of the Maroon 5 song.

It all depends on what instrument you use if you use a guitar played with a soft melody it would make a good song. I do like the lyrics but I'm only one person with an oppinion. If it doesn't work as a song you can always use it as a poem.

IT IS GREAT I REALLY LIKE IT ARE YOU THINKING OF BEING A SINGER

I like it a lot. It's very sweet. I totally agree with ^
Good luck with it =]

sounds good

I think the lyrics are great. They are very simple....but very heartfelt....I think you may have a great future ahead of you!



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