What do you think of these rap lyrics so far? the song isn't done yet though!
Question: Its just a dream of mine/to make music and push out the lines/makin’ sure they rhyme/cause I’m a savage on the grind/tell all the rappers their chreers on the line/I’m comin’ to get the groove on/fuckin that girl?/make sure you have your lube on/cause I’m/chorus:comin in the game not for the fortune and fame just for the love of the game and remove the lame (x2)
Answers: Its just a dream of mine/to make music and push out the lines/makin’ sure they rhyme/cause I’m a savage on the grind/tell all the rappers their chreers on the line/I’m comin’ to get the groove on/fuckin that girl?/make sure you have your lube on/cause I’m/chorus:comin in the game not for the fortune and fame just for the love of the game and remove the lame (x2)
it was good at the begining but then you just started sayin dumb ish but is good so far though... think you can beat me fam?
you got skillz man, id love to hear a beat to go wit dis
lame!
i say good job, just y'know finish it... good job so far
ehh.......I'm not really feelin it.....
ill battle you anytime
your raps missing words like your speechless
the real rap I teach this
go back to the bench you aint a starter you shouldnt have leaked it
disconnect wack mcs
with sushi knives from the japanese
your whole style needs fixing
like drug fiends in prison
im tired of your nursery rhymes
claiming that your a spark of light like a firefly
your words are used up like a melted bag of ice
just came to give advice
raps poisonous like cyanide
while you cant even decypher mine...
i wrote that in 60 seconds. what you think?
i like um.. they cool... but some of it lame... i'm going both ways.. add some more then let us know
the part about the girl seems out of place, other than that i want to hear it put to music (it doesnt help im reading it to the beat of lowrider)
So Far you got a good flow but you can't judge a song until it has a beat and a melody