Will you please tell me what you think of this unfinished song I am writing?!
Question: I haven't felt this way...... in several days...... and it's all because of you.......So, when I see you standing there...... I just look up at you and stare......... oooh............stare..................
Every time I look you in your eye..... It just makes me want to cry.... and if you want to know why..... Then I mustn't tell you a lie..... and the reason is because after all those years we spent together.... one day you just decided to leave me forever.... and I'm just still missing you because I thought our love was true..... And now that I know I was wrong... I'm just writing this song.... and if you ever want to come back to live with me then please.... babe...... feel free.
By the way, "............." just means that you sing that word longer than the rest....or hold it longer than the rest. Also, I would like to let you know that I play the piano, guitar (both electric and acoustic), and the violin. So, I can write my own music to the songs I am working on.
Answers: I haven't felt this way...... in several days...... and it's all because of you.......So, when I see you standing there...... I just look up at you and stare......... oooh............stare..................
Every time I look you in your eye..... It just makes me want to cry.... and if you want to know why..... Then I mustn't tell you a lie..... and the reason is because after all those years we spent together.... one day you just decided to leave me forever.... and I'm just still missing you because I thought our love was true..... And now that I know I was wrong... I'm just writing this song.... and if you ever want to come back to live with me then please.... babe...... feel free.
By the way, "............." just means that you sing that word longer than the rest....or hold it longer than the rest. Also, I would like to let you know that I play the piano, guitar (both electric and acoustic), and the violin. So, I can write my own music to the songs I am working on.
I know it's not good to be but I'm very envious of you. I love music, can't sing for nothin. Had a guitar when I was 10 or 11 but was clueless on how to play it, just screwed around. My friend had a piano and she self taught herself to play. I messed around with it while I hung out with her, but just learned a couple of silly things on it.
Keep doing what your doing, learn all kinds of musical instruments........cause you never know. And have fun.
It's ok but is sounds like all the other heart break love songs,write something original and edgy.