Are the lyrics too harsh? it's my first ever song that i've attempted to!
Question: did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
you worthless piece of trash
i can't belive that i lete you take advantage of me
you knew that i was weak
you knew that i wanted to love someone
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that
wipe that innocent look off of your face
don't act like you didn't do anything wrong
i hope some girl does the same to you
then you'll know how i felt
you worthless piece of trash
i wish i never met you!
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
you're the reason i act the way i do now
i'm giving up on love because of you
i can't trust a guy because of you
give me back my heart!
i want it back!
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
Answers: did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
you worthless piece of trash
i can't belive that i lete you take advantage of me
you knew that i was weak
you knew that i wanted to love someone
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that
wipe that innocent look off of your face
don't act like you didn't do anything wrong
i hope some girl does the same to you
then you'll know how i felt
you worthless piece of trash
i wish i never met you!
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
you're the reason i act the way i do now
i'm giving up on love because of you
i can't trust a guy because of you
give me back my heart!
i want it back!
did you enjoy it?
did you enjoy breaking my heart?
answer my god damn question!
did you enjoy that?
It is a little harsh,but I like it!What's the title?
I'm writing a song myself.Check it out when i put it up,please.
i was already scared at the first stanza! lol. it is harsh. i can actually feel how angry you must've been when you were writing this (although i have never been that angry in my life) . iif you were actualling yelling these lyrics to me, i would definately change my ways!
continue writing lyrics... i think they'd be great!
I can't see it as a song. It doesn't flow like a song. But there is a music style where it does fit. It's called beat neck. Henry Rollins used that style and used rock instead of light jazz. You might want to listen to Henry Rollin's Liar which he adds a little bit more singing to it.
It is harsh yeah, but some ongs are. i rather like the song, don't change it.
I don't like it. I'm sorry but it doesn't have a great message or tone. And if there was music it might help a little. Plus, u don't even say what genre it is. Is it rock, country, emo, punk, pop, what?