I'm writing a song...so?!
Question: here it goes...(I wrote it in a yahoo answers in another name)
Celestial Kisses
Listen to the moon
As it sings us a tune
Keeping us sane
And saving us soon
Pierced like my skin
Left idlely behind
Kissing the waist
That lies on the line....
Help me finish plz....:)
Answers: here it goes...(I wrote it in a yahoo answers in another name)
Celestial Kisses
Listen to the moon
As it sings us a tune
Keeping us sane
And saving us soon
Pierced like my skin
Left idlely behind
Kissing the waist
That lies on the line....
Help me finish plz....:)
just a suggestion to the chorus?
when clouds do seek envious stares
we will drift on the celestial air.
how about 2nd verse....
listen to the ocean
that holds us in sway
reflecting the moonlight
thats making us both pay.....
cant think anymore due to the fact that im now going to sleep, later and keep writing, i like your stuff.
sounds good what kind of song is it?