Do you think these lyrics are good?!


Question: I just wrote them a few minutes ago... there's some more that's not on there....

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Answers: I just wrote them a few minutes ago... there's some more that's not on there....

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The thing about writing lyrics is you don't HEAR it. You don't watch music, taste music, or even feel music. You hear it. It's about rhythm, mood, notes, etc. The list goes on forever...

I suggest changing the theme of the song. Though the rhyme scheme is there, rhyming isn't everything. The theme of Robin-Hood seems, to me, somewhat "childish." Make it something teens enjoy, and you'll have a croud of fans faster than you know it.

My band and I got rid of our singer, whom always sang about the past(got annoying after the first four or five songs), and I started to sing. I, personally, sang against a bunch of administration, and got myself in just a little bit of trouble. However, everybody seemed to enjoy it a lot more. Just goes to show that the singer is an important part, and a singer isn't anything without lyrics.

NOPEE WHAT YOU JUST WROTE STINKS :p

its nice

i like it. :)

Nope can't say I like it. Seems like when you wrote it you were trying to start a fight with someone.



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