Are My Lyrics Good?!
Question: this is for people that like rap
Run up on me get your motherfuck!ng wig split/ come test me get stuffed in a trunk b!tch/ disrespect me and u better make a move quick/ cuz i aint tolerating no motherfuck!ng b!tch sh!t/ ni99a tryna lie what talking bout/ better hurry up and put my gun up in his mouth/ he tryna say dat he coming from da south/ it doesn't even matter cuz i'll stil run up in yo house/ coming with a knife clips tech and all/ as soon as i walk in there's sh!t in his draws/ ni99a way 2 skared so he had 2 pause/ since he did that now he's gonna take a loss/ thats what he gets for tryna test a boss/ ni99a didnt know the consequence or his loss/ now his *** is dead and covered in moss/ shoulda played cool and just payed the cost/ this ni99a right here aint got no good heart/ i'm always down just to finish what you start/ look into my eyes while I tear u apart/ ***** over there playing that b!tch sh!t/ better make a move or bust on his click/
tell me wat u think
Answers: this is for people that like rap
Run up on me get your motherfuck!ng wig split/ come test me get stuffed in a trunk b!tch/ disrespect me and u better make a move quick/ cuz i aint tolerating no motherfuck!ng b!tch sh!t/ ni99a tryna lie what talking bout/ better hurry up and put my gun up in his mouth/ he tryna say dat he coming from da south/ it doesn't even matter cuz i'll stil run up in yo house/ coming with a knife clips tech and all/ as soon as i walk in there's sh!t in his draws/ ni99a way 2 skared so he had 2 pause/ since he did that now he's gonna take a loss/ thats what he gets for tryna test a boss/ ni99a didnt know the consequence or his loss/ now his *** is dead and covered in moss/ shoulda played cool and just payed the cost/ this ni99a right here aint got no good heart/ i'm always down just to finish what you start/ look into my eyes while I tear u apart/ ***** over there playing that b!tch sh!t/ better make a move or bust on his click/
tell me wat u think
hmmm, you could calm down on the cursing other than that its good for rap music
I don't go for this kind of stuff, but I actually think it's pretty good.
No. No part of that is remotely good. Those aren't even lyrics. It's just a bunch of sentences that scream "look at me, I really wish I were a gangster but I know netspeak too well to actually be one."
My eyes!! My eyes!!
Yo rhymes are weaker than tetley steeped tea, your white my friend so a rapper you cant be, matter fact my grandma had better rhymes at her eulogy,take up a hobby of collecting comic book super heroes, cuz your bank account will never yield ones with six zeroes...do i smell a rap battle???...stick to your day job.....as long as its not rapping........jus playin man its alright
Nah dude yu need 2 tone it down a bit...
Unless yu literally hav a gun an wud actuli kill the guy yur on about, dont chat sh!t bout it.
True rappers are movin on from all that stuf man, ppl misconcieve sum artists by wht they do.. Lyk NAS and the whole "Ni**er" album fing.. he ws actuli tryin to make a stand sayin tht it dusnt mean anything n e more, and tht ppl shouldnt see it as racist if a white person ses it in a non-rascist way.
Yur bars are alryt tho, yu jus need to say whts on YUR mind, not wht yu fink makes commerical sh!t wht it USED to be.
you don't have to cuss every two and a hlaf seconds. Lil Wayne doesn't even cuss in EVERY one of his lyrics.
not bad for a 12 year old. you know, rap use to not suck. Maybe try to write something good dawg