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Question: can you please help me with some of these lyrics to make them better thanks =)

The day that we first met
i thought you were the one
the one that i could spend my whole life with
together we were one of a kind
talking on the phone hours after hours
i thought that nothing can go wrong

can you please try to make these lyrics better and add some more into them =)

thank you very much


Answers: can you please help me with some of these lyrics to make them better thanks =)

The day that we first met
i thought you were the one
the one that i could spend my whole life with
together we were one of a kind
talking on the phone hours after hours
i thought that nothing can go wrong

can you please try to make these lyrics better and add some more into them =)

thank you very much

When we first met
I knew you were the one,
the one i was searching for.
When I'm with you,
Eternity isn't enough.
You're my heart and soul.
We spent hours on the phone,
And
I knew everything would be all right.
But you faded away,
You met another woman,
and she stole you
right out of my arms.
I needed you more than ever,
I was broken, and lost,
But,
with you,
I thought i was found.
I long for the happy days
when everything was gonna be all right,
but then she had to come along.
Can't i have you back?
I just want to hold you one more time,
If only for one moment,
just one second,
Let us go back
Stripped of hate
Let us fly on the wings of love.
Please
I know in my heart
and somewhere in yours,
We,
Belong.



i don't know, i made it up in the spur of the moment. XD

Ok, but you're going to have to owe me ten thousand dollars.

When first we met
the purpose of my life was revealed
until the end of our days I would hold you in my arms
So rare a thing to share with you
the whisper of your words caress my ear
All is well and again I say.... all is well forever.

I remember the day that we met
You seemed so perfect
My heart sewed together
The bill went up
And so did my mood
I didn't know what would happen next

hmm, the lyrics dont seem to flow with each other...



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