Is this a good freestyle, rate 1 as the wrost all the way up to 10 as the best?!
Question: release this rage on a lonely stage rippin out the page in my locked up cage raging my anger through heart and soul starving to have fame and beat this game i have to be tame its lame to see you happy its really crappy to know what i need and dont wearing nice clothes and bitching of hos those words i speak rather die laying in the sreet fck being an OG i rather die being me
Answers: release this rage on a lonely stage rippin out the page in my locked up cage raging my anger through heart and soul starving to have fame and beat this game i have to be tame its lame to see you happy its really crappy to know what i need and dont wearing nice clothes and bitching of hos those words i speak rather die laying in the sreet fck being an OG i rather die being me
9, to me this was really good. the guy that commented b4 doesnt kno WHAT the hell he's talking bout. ur words are sick, and honestly i wouldnt b scared 4 u if u batteled with lil wayne. keep doin wat u do, and dont let anyone put u down. u've got talent/
1. u're not good at this.
hmmmmmm
It's hard to know.
Lots of factors involved.
When do you come in?
What about melody and your timing?
Lots to consider
but there's something there.
4, I know it seems like your doing really good, but If you keep at going at it like all the rappers. Like Say if you got to the stage where your underground right. Which you will get to, If you keep trying, You will look back and say, Man those was some pretty whack rhymes. No offense.
3 and i am being real man its like u are tryin to be the next Canibus but sounding like Hurricane Chris it aint working
It's hard to tell without hearing you saying it we dont know the melody or anything you could have some potential keep tryin but I'd advice against posting your music on the Internet someone might steal it!!
Could you make it longer. It needs more detail in it.