How is this song I wrote?!


Question: How do you like this song I wrote?? I am only 12. I have to do it in a couple parts cause it won't all fit in one post...

Believe in you

Verse 1.

I know how it feels for everyone to dislike you
I know how it feels when you've only got one true friend
I know how it feels for everyone to ignore you
I know how it feels I know how it feels ooh yeahh

Verse 2.
I know how it feels when nobody trusts you
I know how it feels when everybody talks behind your back
I know how it feels when you tell a lie and then feels guilty
oooh yeeeaahh I know how it feels

(Chorus)
But all you gotta do is believe in you and everything
will come true it's just a matter of time believe in you

and your heart will turn in the right direction you just
need to believe in you and everything you've ever wanted
will be right in front of youuuuuu


Answers: How do you like this song I wrote?? I am only 12. I have to do it in a couple parts cause it won't all fit in one post...

Believe in you

Verse 1.

I know how it feels for everyone to dislike you
I know how it feels when you've only got one true friend
I know how it feels for everyone to ignore you
I know how it feels I know how it feels ooh yeahh

Verse 2.
I know how it feels when nobody trusts you
I know how it feels when everybody talks behind your back
I know how it feels when you tell a lie and then feels guilty
oooh yeeeaahh I know how it feels

(Chorus)
But all you gotta do is believe in you and everything
will come true it's just a matter of time believe in you

and your heart will turn in the right direction you just
need to believe in you and everything you've ever wanted
will be right in front of youuuuuu

Very nice. I like the last verse you added because the first two verses talk about the challenges of believing in yourself and the last verse shows how believing in yourself can have a positive result. I also liked that it's not all about how other people treat you but also that sometimes you will make mistake too "I know how it feels when you tell a lie and then feel guilty"). It's very mature of you to take personal responsibility as part of the message of the song.

You should definitely keep writing.

sounds nice i feel a lot of people can relate to that song.

Depends on the tone...this could be a spiritual country slow tone music thing...If you do that, it will sound cool.

If you are, say, 15 or under it's cute and your peers will understand the lyrics and relate to them. If you are over 16, this si pretty cliched, overdone, simple stuff.

A bit too much I Know's but, I think it's great. I am 14 and am in a band and we kind of need a singer.

I like it. It's simple and could be great with the right music.

Its okay, but i'd need to hear the beat.

I think it sounds adorable. I can hear it in a Disney movie.

sounds fabulous

That was so good.
I'm feeling nice after that song.
The song is like in a Disney movie.

Judging from the lyrics you may need some proffesional help. (call a shrink)

i love it! you see we need more songs like this! it increases self confidence

sounds great. keep it coming.

omagaud!!! this is soooo awsome!!!!!!! i think yew are great at it just needs a little tweeking ok cuz i tried singing it its rlly cool just dosent "work" but i think its tottalyy awsome ya noe wat i mean??

IT'S B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L !!!!! I luv it! <3

its a bit repetitive but i think people can relate to it, alot of people . Ooooooooooooooooooo yeaaaaaa! :-D



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