Rhyme ..... for comment...............?!
Question: My Storm
The clouds appear motionless, in the sky,
As shades of blue and gray, go by,
My mood, swings,
Like wings,
They take me to a distant place,
A sense of calm, a tranquil space,
To ease my mind...
How kind,
The gentle rain, caressed my face,
Removed the dirt (the hurt), without a trace,
To set me free...
As you can see,
The drops roll down, across my frame,
Reminding me, this is no game,
Life is for living...
Ever giving,
Simple pleasures of the heart,
A pulse in time, a refreshing start,
It's time to grow...
Let go,
Hold fast to the wind, and fly,
Be free, the thunder cries,
It rains for me...
I see... the possibility.
Touche
Answers: My Storm
The clouds appear motionless, in the sky,
As shades of blue and gray, go by,
My mood, swings,
Like wings,
They take me to a distant place,
A sense of calm, a tranquil space,
To ease my mind...
How kind,
The gentle rain, caressed my face,
Removed the dirt (the hurt), without a trace,
To set me free...
As you can see,
The drops roll down, across my frame,
Reminding me, this is no game,
Life is for living...
Ever giving,
Simple pleasures of the heart,
A pulse in time, a refreshing start,
It's time to grow...
Let go,
Hold fast to the wind, and fly,
Be free, the thunder cries,
It rains for me...
I see... the possibility.
Touche
VERY good.
It is obvious by your questions that you are experiencing something that is very important to you, at present.
I hope you achieve the peace you are striving for, my friend.
My wish for you..... Serenity and freedom......May you soar, free of hurt and doubt....Just soar ~~~~~~Your possibilites are endless~~~~~
Oh My Gosh!!!!!!!! That is the absolute BEST poem I've ever read!!!!!!!!!! Phenomenal!!!!!!!! You are really good!!!!!!!!! I cant describe it Terrific!!!!! Fantastic!!!!! Amazing!!!!! Phenomenal!!!! Really great job!!!!!
That was really nice, love the ending.
dats some tight sh!t u got dere, its 10 tymes betta dan wah dese n***** put up on the RHH section,
its actually pretty good
keep it up wid poetry
That's a piece of your heart right there. I travel alot, but you take me places in my mind.
This is the s'hit right here. A REAL BEAUTY.
Sunshine said it all...............
OMG touche, You did it again!...
that was beautiful.
Since I just heard Lupe Fiasco's The Cool not that long ago, the drops rolling down reminds me of "The Coolest".
I like this right here.