Rap verses tell me what u think.?!
Question: " I'm droppin hot sh** like a huggies pamper, now a day's I come threw I'm gettin pamper, u broke 4 da money heard u living out ur camper, bout u a shotta ur first job was dancer......
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or I got green everywhere like I'm playin 4 Boston ur girl is in da stunner stone cold steve austin, we do it late night and daily like carson, rug burn she could charge ur boy for rson.....
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" We can take it real slow but not today, rap ur hair around my fist like boxing tape the other hand around ur throat rear naked choke while I nibble on ur loave until u take it whole.....
As soon as I'm into dat room, im into dat womb, and if u want we can film dis sh** put it all over da internet whooo. I'm going for a little bit rope hey for a little bit a role play and I no ur into dat too. and I don't normally wear shades in bed but I'm feelin dat cool.......
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Answers: " I'm droppin hot sh** like a huggies pamper, now a day's I come threw I'm gettin pamper, u broke 4 da money heard u living out ur camper, bout u a shotta ur first job was dancer......
or
or I got green everywhere like I'm playin 4 Boston ur girl is in da stunner stone cold steve austin, we do it late night and daily like carson, rug burn she could charge ur boy for rson.....
or
" We can take it real slow but not today, rap ur hair around my fist like boxing tape the other hand around ur throat rear naked choke while I nibble on ur loave until u take it whole.....
As soon as I'm into dat room, im into dat womb, and if u want we can film dis sh** put it all over da internet whooo. I'm going for a little bit rope hey for a little bit a role play and I no ur into dat too. and I don't normally wear shades in bed but I'm feelin dat cool.......
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The Middle one is the ****, but if you don't like it i would go with the last one cause that's good too.
That last one is sick but the best "Rap-Wise."
r u serious!?!
tha only part i like wasz tha sentence " im going for a lil bit rope hey for a lil bit a role play" and datsz it but keep doin wat u doin and u got brah...(cant wait to see u out da being a rapp artist)
wack
:)
its pretty cool.u work harder at it then everybody will know who u are.good luck
first verse has the best lyrics... but change the "dancer" word at the end...
they both suck
try this
it's tricky I'm picky baby, but I just spotted you
doin' your thing, g-string, shoe string point of view, hey
lend me ya body, you got me in a zone
bet a million in a half past, i can make you explode
you don't wanna brave the cold, you wanna Diddy Combs
i can take you on outer-limits away from home
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in the middle of the club doin' a rodeo show
the hoes seem schemey, wet dreamy, emphasism obsessed gleemy
(incredible sex) you need me
ease me, please me baby, i maybe am little crazy but in a way that.....
If you battle with prewrittens, you'll lose...especially with those lines.