Im a newly born raper bout a year under my belt just wonderin wat ya think of so!
Question: Son you garbage we got lie detectors, man we know you fake,
cuz you amount to more *** than girls at a concert for Justin Timberlake,
Your whack raps, dawg your whole verse sound like a chorus,
Cuz you repeat the flow, Questioning me like a lost tourist,
You catz is boring to me, lets state the facts, you need a dictionary...
To post ya raps, but you seem to have forgot the use of a cemetery...
I bury the lies, along with you cries cuz ***** this is a lyrical avalanche...
So Why you crossing my path, I over do **** like using a laser to kill ants,
Son lets be honest, you should pay homage, so ***** wheres the money,
You suppose to be a thug, more like a clown, cuz you niggas is funny.
Respects
to all hope i dont insalt not trying to just rapping
Answers: Son you garbage we got lie detectors, man we know you fake,
cuz you amount to more *** than girls at a concert for Justin Timberlake,
Your whack raps, dawg your whole verse sound like a chorus,
Cuz you repeat the flow, Questioning me like a lost tourist,
You catz is boring to me, lets state the facts, you need a dictionary...
To post ya raps, but you seem to have forgot the use of a cemetery...
I bury the lies, along with you cries cuz ***** this is a lyrical avalanche...
So Why you crossing my path, I over do **** like using a laser to kill ants,
Son lets be honest, you should pay homage, so ***** wheres the money,
You suppose to be a thug, more like a clown, cuz you niggas is funny.
Respects
to all hope i dont insalt not trying to just rapping
gud but i would move away from writing rap cos they sound bad and rappers get no credit
Dumb
You know in your question you spelled out raper not rapper.
its good
Pretty pimp!
Go M&M 2!!
YOURE A RAPER?
that is SH*T
Yes, he is a newly born rapist that has been raping for about a year now. Don't be too hard on him.
Too be slightly more serious, I just don't have a taste for rapping. Just because you're typing out rap lyrics, that doesn't mean you have to spell every word long. Some of it just didn't make sense to me. The idea just wasn't that clear to me. Also, saying lyrical avalanche, then killing ants with a laser, that is really forced rhyming right there. Not to mention I don't like it when people mention the song they're doing (lyrical avalanche again).