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Question: This Time Imperfect Lyrics
A.F.I.


I cannot leave here, I cannot stay,
Forever haunted, more than afraid,
Asphyxiate on words I would say,
I'm drawn to a blackened sky as I turn blue,
There are no flowers, no not this time,
There'll be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words, I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this, hurts me,
I cannot stay here, I cannot leave,
Just like all I loved, I'm make-believe,
Imagined heart, I disappear,
Seems...no one will appear here and make me real,
There are no flowers, no, not this time,
There will be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this hurts me,
I'd tell you how it haunts me,
I'd tell you how it haunts me,
(cuts through my day, and sinks into my dreams)
I'd tell you that it haunts me,
(cuts through my day, and sinks into my dreams)
You don't care that it haunts me,
Oh!
There are no flowers, no, not this time,
There will be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this hurts me,
Just how much this hurts me,
Just how much you.


Answers: This Time Imperfect Lyrics
A.F.I.


I cannot leave here, I cannot stay,
Forever haunted, more than afraid,
Asphyxiate on words I would say,
I'm drawn to a blackened sky as I turn blue,
There are no flowers, no not this time,
There'll be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words, I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this, hurts me,
I cannot stay here, I cannot leave,
Just like all I loved, I'm make-believe,
Imagined heart, I disappear,
Seems...no one will appear here and make me real,
There are no flowers, no, not this time,
There will be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this hurts me,
I'd tell you how it haunts me,
I'd tell you how it haunts me,
(cuts through my day, and sinks into my dreams)
I'd tell you that it haunts me,
(cuts through my day, and sinks into my dreams)
You don't care that it haunts me,
Oh!
There are no flowers, no, not this time,
There will be no angels gracing the lines,
Just these stark words I find,
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak,
I'd share with you could I only speak,
Just how much this hurts me,
Just how much this hurts me,
Just how much you.

8.4 out of 10

good

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Its really good! It could be a song on the radio- if you wrote this you have definite TALENT and work towards getting someone to buy these lyrics! WOW! This is ridicously good. And I know b/c it made me feel something!

pretty good few bumpy spots here and there

I'm not being cynical but it almost sounds as if lying in a lonely grave....

Cheer up mate - Spring's just around the corner!!

i like them but i get more of a poem from it sooo yyaaa

I don't really get it
Is it in like verses chorus and is there a bridge
Is there a tune

umm...i would give it a 7...it gives a shadow of pain...nice

Sad, but as long as it stays in the metal or hard rock category it's good.

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i like it.. a tiny bit pop'y though.. they could have broken the ryhme... http://www.seeklyrics.com/lyrics/Morriss...

but it was good.. I felt something shift in my head.. if they made it a bit more gritty and free-form it would be better... not too keen on A.F.I.. but they're ok..



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