Good lyrics your opinion!?!
Question: This are the lyrics:
Everytime that she cries
She's left to carry
the weight of the world...
Her friends
and family
don't know that she's falling apart...
She is left to
drown in the tears
that she cries...
But no one seems
to hear her
cry for help-......
She knows that
she wouldn't be able
to bottle up her pain anymore
Answers: This are the lyrics:
Everytime that she cries
She's left to carry
the weight of the world...
Her friends
and family
don't know that she's falling apart...
She is left to
drown in the tears
that she cries...
But no one seems
to hear her
cry for help-......
She knows that
she wouldn't be able
to bottle up her pain anymore
oooohhhh i like this song
i really do
i would so hear it =]
tell me when you finish it
pretty good
I love it!
that really good,
did you write it?
its a little sad though,
but in a good way!
good!
Well, it would leave the hearers or readers with a question as to what she did to overcome her sorrow - commit suicide or get help, kind of like a cliff-hanger.
its alright.
it needs some editing.
try this:
Everytime that she cries
She's left to carry
The weight of the world...
Her Friends and Family
thinks that shes fine,
but on the inside she's
drowned from the tears she's cried.
nobody's there to hear her cries
she finally unravels and she runs and hides,
living in denial all through her life, she finally
realizes that she cant hide behind the music and dreams.....
idk.
try that.