Song I wrote....?!
Question: Me and my ex-girlfriend broke up about 2 weeks ago and the day after we broke up she went over to a friends house and he sexually harassed her and she has told me and a good amount of others that he did...just not her parents...no teachers at school...and so the other day she was talking to this girl that I am friends with and was saying that I am a liar and that the guy that sexually harassed her is telling the truth and that I'm a bad person for saying things like that and I was just got really upset that she would do that and I decided to write a song on how I felt...Comments and Criticism would be nice :D Thanks!
Answers: Me and my ex-girlfriend broke up about 2 weeks ago and the day after we broke up she went over to a friends house and he sexually harassed her and she has told me and a good amount of others that he did...just not her parents...no teachers at school...and so the other day she was talking to this girl that I am friends with and was saying that I am a liar and that the guy that sexually harassed her is telling the truth and that I'm a bad person for saying things like that and I was just got really upset that she would do that and I decided to write a song on how I felt...Comments and Criticism would be nice :D Thanks!
Wow, what strong emotion! But I have to say, that is an amazing song you've written. The single words are the end are all with a certain mood and ending, which makes them sound and look good together. Wow, good job! 10/10 dude!
And I'm sorry for what had happened. =[
you seemed pretty pissed at life...