DO YoU LIKE MY NEW SONG ?!
Question: ITS NOT DONE YET
AND ITS SOMETHING DIFFERENT
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I'm running away
My boots are going through the winter snow
I don't have anywhere to go
I wake up the snow has melted
and the sun is rising
I'm under the tall tree
with it leaves planted over me
playing my guiatar
and theres know one from afar
I start singing
My foot starts tapping to the beat
and eventuly my secrets are becoming a melody
Oh what calamity
I wake up and the sun is rising
I'm under the tall tree
with its leaves planted over me
playing my guitar
and theres know from afar
Its just me and my guitar
Its just me and my guitar
Ya its just me and my guitar
Answers: ITS NOT DONE YET
AND ITS SOMETHING DIFFERENT
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I'm running away
My boots are going through the winter snow
I don't have anywhere to go
I wake up the snow has melted
and the sun is rising
I'm under the tall tree
with it leaves planted over me
playing my guiatar
and theres know one from afar
I start singing
My foot starts tapping to the beat
and eventuly my secrets are becoming a melody
Oh what calamity
I wake up and the sun is rising
I'm under the tall tree
with its leaves planted over me
playing my guitar
and theres know from afar
Its just me and my guitar
Its just me and my guitar
Ya its just me and my guitar
You could write for Billy Ray Cyrus!
Just kidding. But it sounds like one of his songs. Are you trying to write country? Or something else? Make sure it's poetry. Music is all poetry. When you are writing, don't think that you are writing a song. Pretend you are writing a really long poem that you have to read to a huge audience telling about something you care deeply for. But don't give away what your writing about. That's what people hate the most is hearing about something in the song, when they want to figure it out themselves. Take your time when writing, and think about something that effected you very deeply and take and make it into something you never thought it could be!
That's what people want, is something you've experienced but they haven't.
Good Luck!
awhhhh its adorablee, i lve itt (:
you should publish itt! <3
goodddjobb, hahaha.
wow thats terrible
Yeah, I imagine it as a country pop song, but with a voice like Regina Spektor's.
The lyrics are looking nice so far, but make sure it's not going to be repetitive.
It has potential. I don't know what beat you're playing it to. The beat I created in my head wants me to make a couple of changes
Line 2: remove winter
Line 4: it seems a bit choppy.
Line 7: you might change planted to hung.
Keep up the good work.
wat the fuckk
I don't think its a good idea to put the words of your song on here ......some one will nick them off you.
The song is OK.