Me and my band did a song.?!
Question: okay you dont know the tune.
but its a rock band.
i play acoustic guitar some songs.
i sing.
No, No,
I can't describe
the way that i ascribe
to the masterpiece
that keeps me breathing
Now that
I transcribe
that letter for bribe
to keep the peace,
of our home underneath the sheathing
Oh, Ho,
I don't feel like
begging,
clingin to your
legging,
Knowing that your
Hating,
Me for this.
No, No
I can't imbibe
that fact that you circumscribe
the acclimation
this is your creation.
Why, Why,
Are you still Alive,
you hardly even strive
to not risk your life.
Time to take a dive.
Answers: okay you dont know the tune.
but its a rock band.
i play acoustic guitar some songs.
i sing.
No, No,
I can't describe
the way that i ascribe
to the masterpiece
that keeps me breathing
Now that
I transcribe
that letter for bribe
to keep the peace,
of our home underneath the sheathing
Oh, Ho,
I don't feel like
begging,
clingin to your
legging,
Knowing that your
Hating,
Me for this.
No, No
I can't imbibe
that fact that you circumscribe
the acclimation
this is your creation.
Why, Why,
Are you still Alive,
you hardly even strive
to not risk your life.
Time to take a dive.
William Hung...Is this you????
grats want a freaking cookie?
Please dear God try out for American Idol. We all need a good laugh.
Okay? Well this is worthless without a video or audio file.
Good for you! i'm jelious.
well i think that awsome but umm... i know a little about the music bizz ... i so hope u have that copy written or something cuz someone can steal that off of here
Asking if we like a song without hearing the tune is about as useful as a bucket of warm spit.
Pretty good up until the very last stanza...needs some work to be up there with the rest of the song. Good Luck!
Don't know what your question is but...
Play shows for free and at friend's parties. Opportunities will follow. That's the best way to get started, not on yahoo answers.
Wow this is pathetic. You guys have no talent at writing lyrics! Stop and disband now.
I am serious you are the worst writer I have ever met. Next in line with Soulja Boy
that piece of lyric did not contain any characteristic of a rock song at all. not even alternative rock. it sounded like a Rihanna song. You rhyme way too much way too often. you need to reduce the frequency of your rhyming and flow your thoughts with no boundaries but make sure you cover it up in singing. Rock is not about whining or crying like a b1tch. Rock is about rocking, im guessing your a huge grunge fan, so you need to look at who set great examples, Do you see a reason why Nirvana still live as a grunge legend and creed is forgotten ?
Sounds like you're mad at your chick or Mom..."Oh, Ho,
I don't feel like
begging,
clingin to your
legging,
Knowing that your
Hating,
Me for this."
God I rock more than you, at least I have something to show for it. I have my recordings and my stage days! **** stop talking about how good you are and ******* play! Thats music man.
lol. impressive. :) jk. but not bad........ :)