Are these good lyrics?!
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I'm going to produce it (if it's good) along with some other stuff around next year, or the year after that
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I'm going to produce it (if it's good) along with some other stuff around next year, or the year after that
i like it, you should make it upbeat,but shorten it and make the lyrics a little less wordy. id deffinitly listen to it
good luck!!
wow it touched me
yes very good i wish u the best of luck (:
wow really deep. can't wait to it with the music,...best of luck~
Yepp verryy good =]
no offense but those were horrible. don't be mad at me i am just expressing my opinion
If it was meant to be a poem,it's fine.But if it's for a song...erm...you could try to shorten it.It sounds emotional for one.Are you having difficulties now?Anyway,overall,it's very touching and makes me sypathise for some reason.Keep up the good work!And please do inform me of your future works.I love fresh new ideas!
its okay.
Too long and too wordy. Its going to be really hard to sing.
You asked for my opinion.....
what huh!???????