Does this sound like a good chorus to a song?!
Question: don't try to judge me
cuz i don't fit a stereotype
i'm just me
and i'm living my life
sometimes it gets complicated
but i konw i can work it out
one day i will rule the world
so you better watch out
p.s.
if you steal it and don't tell/credit me, i will hunt you down and make you pay
=]
Answers: don't try to judge me
cuz i don't fit a stereotype
i'm just me
and i'm living my life
sometimes it gets complicated
but i konw i can work it out
one day i will rule the world
so you better watch out
p.s.
if you steal it and don't tell/credit me, i will hunt you down and make you pay
=]
I like it. I just think the last line ends a little too abruptly. I thing you need to add another cylable. I like the words I just don't think it flows at the end.
It's nice and all...but not to be rude one bit, if you don't want anyone stealing it....don't post it.
omfg it is amazing. i want to hear ur music!!!!! email me sometime emily_090@yahoo.com
its a good chorus but the ending is a lil weird..
ish great.
i dont' see how you make it all rhyme,,, you're good at this. haha.
I suck at song writing, so I just stick to poetry. =D