Can i borrow a bit of your time?!

Question: hi. i just love to hear comments on the songs that i wrote and i'm wondering if you can check this out:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=58907...

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Answers: hi. i just love to hear comments on the songs that i wrote and i'm wondering if you can check this out:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=58907...

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totally awesome man, keep it up!!!! , i played it like 3 times, :P

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nice lyrics work on the voice a little (sorry just being honest! )

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