I'm writing a story, I wanna know If I'm wording my words correctly ?!
Question: Have you ever heard someone say, " That song, or movie was a graphic thrill ? " - Or does that not make sense ?
Freddy Krueger is a graphic thriller, that goes together right.
But to shorten it to something like .. " Warclouds sinister a graphic thrill " - Is that bad grammar ?
It's not neccesarily a story, moreless poetry, so any suggestions to the sentence above this ...
Warcloud is a artist, with a song called: " Sinister " - I wanna put, " Warclouds sinister a graphic thrill, in a song " ... hahaha
Answers: Have you ever heard someone say, " That song, or movie was a graphic thrill ? " - Or does that not make sense ?
Freddy Krueger is a graphic thriller, that goes together right.
But to shorten it to something like .. " Warclouds sinister a graphic thrill " - Is that bad grammar ?
It's not neccesarily a story, moreless poetry, so any suggestions to the sentence above this ...
Warcloud is a artist, with a song called: " Sinister " - I wanna put, " Warclouds sinister a graphic thrill, in a song " ... hahaha
I just wanna let you know that people can add more details to their answers....So you might be getting more at your other Q.on the same subject....I like it BTW...Good luck