I still need help with my rap?!
Question: all i have for my rap is
Skate
Rate
Skate
Hate
Skatin while others be ratin man
Skatin while others be hatin man
Don’t be saying skating is easy man
Other skaters will hatin on my skills man
While another skater be dieing trying to do a little Ollie man
Answers: all i have for my rap is
Skate
Rate
Skate
Hate
Skatin while others be ratin man
Skatin while others be hatin man
Don’t be saying skating is easy man
Other skaters will hatin on my skills man
While another skater be dieing trying to do a little Ollie man
dont wanna be mean or anythin
but dat ain't too good
try using other words
like
fate
mate
late
cake
sake
u know
jus use anythin n make it work
if u need more help
hit me up:
huizar13@yahoo.com
or
http://www.myspace.com/dhthaking
i own my own record label
R3V3RS3 R3CORDS
we aim for helping nw rappers rather than already famous ones
(but we will work wit famous ones)
(we will also work wit R&B and any kind of hip-hop)
my name by tha way is DH:ThaKiNG
Could I suggest a guitar and bass combo? Maybe a drummer and a keyboardist too.
Oh wait, this is rap. For a second I figured you wanted music. ;-)
i dont get it....
May I suggest not ending all your lines wit "man" After the first 3 times it just get's repetitive. That's as horrible as Soulja Boy.
lol
mine is better
my name is mike i like to hike
and bike and run
with my gun
ima shoot that son
of a b****
and dump him in a ditch
PEACE!
*thug pose*
To tell you the truth man, that really sucks. For one thing, skatin is gay.
But then to try and rap it is just dumb. I know a lot about rappin, bein the fact that I'm a rapper.
Don't end everythin with "man" because it just sounds gay. Don't ruin rap anymore than losers like Soulja Boy did.
The secret is to repeat everything you say at least once. This makes the rap longer. This sounds better when you talk like Xibit:
I skate while you rate (ah)
Skate while you rate
I skate while you hate (ah)
Skate while you hate
Skatin' while you ratin' (ah)
Skatin' while you hatin'
Skatin' while you ratin' (ah)
Skatin' while you hatin'
Skatin' while the others be ratin' maaaannnnn
Skatin' while the others be hatin' maaaannnnn
Don't say skatin' is eaaaassssyyyyy
Don't say skatin' is eaaaasssssyyyy
If you do I'ma sue because you a beezy
If you do I'ma sue because you a beezy
Don't be hatin' on my skillz
Don't be hatin' on my skillz
You can't even Ollie without getin' killed
You can't even Ollie without getiin' killed