I just wrote a couple of raps, please comment?!


Question: now i just want you to know that when i was writing these raps, i was just writing whatever came into my head without even thinking. okay so please comment them, also some of the words i wrote down werent allowed to put on here, but ill try to put them anyway

iight now listen here homie, u sittin right there acting all tough nd shiit
but ur nothin compared to da game i spit
cuz this shiit right here aint no game
ur so called style sounds all da same
niigga you cant even rock a beat, ur flow is wack
mine is concrete
niigga come on at me with ur weak rhymes
if i told u once i told u twice
im da shiit when it comes to da game i spit
im da queen and its time to admit
tryna sit over there and get ya game up
niigga please, ur just another screw-up
everyone knows ima real g baby
so when it comes to me
get on ya knees and be afraid, hope and pray
that i wont destroy you, lyk i did wit my game


Answers: now i just want you to know that when i was writing these raps, i was just writing whatever came into my head without even thinking. okay so please comment them, also some of the words i wrote down werent allowed to put on here, but ill try to put them anyway

iight now listen here homie, u sittin right there acting all tough nd shiit
but ur nothin compared to da game i spit
cuz this shiit right here aint no game
ur so called style sounds all da same
niigga you cant even rock a beat, ur flow is wack
mine is concrete
niigga come on at me with ur weak rhymes
if i told u once i told u twice
im da shiit when it comes to da game i spit
im da queen and its time to admit
tryna sit over there and get ya game up
niigga please, ur just another screw-up
everyone knows ima real g baby
so when it comes to me
get on ya knees and be afraid, hope and pray
that i wont destroy you, lyk i did wit my game

the rhymes you spit is kind of sick with a lil more practice yoube down with the clickmaybe one day youll make a hit...... you dig i use to rap when i was kid now that im big i just handle biz so from me to you i wish you the best keep practice and get that (S) on your chest n f-ck the rest

sad.

it was ok... it needz sum improvement but keep it up and u might make it bigg gurl

thats cool



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