Can you help me write a song?!
Question: Can you tell me what's wrong with this?
I climb up the biggest mountain. To try to find it. Find it. What do I do? This is my weakest point. I can't find...
Chorus:
The moment of truth. The moment. Yeah, yeah. I don't know where it is. Help me fly. I am blind to my flaws. I can't see. The possibilities. I need to find. The moment of truth.
Behind some doors, I am trapped in my fears. Get me out of here. Try so hard to make it. I need a chance to sparkle. Can you here me shouting? I want to find the...
Chorus
Moment of Truth. I'm telling you. OH OH OH. Gotta find it.
The center of my heart, there's a candle. It's getting brighter. Stronger!!!!!
Chorus
I've found the moment of truth.
Answers: Can you tell me what's wrong with this?
I climb up the biggest mountain. To try to find it. Find it. What do I do? This is my weakest point. I can't find...
Chorus:
The moment of truth. The moment. Yeah, yeah. I don't know where it is. Help me fly. I am blind to my flaws. I can't see. The possibilities. I need to find. The moment of truth.
Behind some doors, I am trapped in my fears. Get me out of here. Try so hard to make it. I need a chance to sparkle. Can you here me shouting? I want to find the...
Chorus
Moment of Truth. I'm telling you. OH OH OH. Gotta find it.
The center of my heart, there's a candle. It's getting brighter. Stronger!!!!!
Chorus
I've found the moment of truth.
Can you tell me what's wrong with this?
I climb up the biggest mountain. To try to find it. Find it. What do I do? This is my weakest point. I can't find...
Chorus:
The moment of truth. The moment. Yeah, yeah. I don't know where it is. Help me fly. I am blind to my flaws. I can't see. The possibilities. I need to find. The moment of truth.
Behind some doors, I am trapped in my fears. Get me out of here. Try so hard to make it. I need a chance to sparkle. Can you here me shouting? I want to find the...
Chorus
Moment of Truth. I'm telling you. OH OH OH. Gotta find it.
The center of my heart, there's a candle. It's getting brighter. Stronger!!!!!
chorus
my moment of truth is coming
its coming oh so close
i cannot hide my feellings any more
i need to scream
when i stop and think
its not what it seems!!!!!
chorus
the moment of truth
its coming to me
like a phone booth
im hoping to see
why cant i be free anymore
i feel so trapped under the weight of my skin
i never again will win
but wait whats that
chorus
its the moment of truth
its the moment truth
its the moment of truth
its my moment of truth...
oh woah
my moment of truth...
It's a little too emo. And a little rhyming might help.
emo is good.
Sounds good to me.
I don't know about chance to sparkle, though.
:)
yeah i think its pretty good, but i agree with above, not so sure i like "chance to sparkle"....maybe change sparkle to something else
good luck! keep at it!
perfect! i lurve it!