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Question: "I'm silent in the dark" the samaria said
"I'll sneak up behind you, and chop off your head
I understand your movements and hear what you say
If you can see me, it's too late to pray"
I wouldn't travel alone at night, only with a friend
I'm coming to take you down and to bring you in
I can stealth my way up to your chest, hit you with my knife
I'm the one who choses if you keep your life
When I come to kill you, don't start to weep
I am able to kill you even when you sleep
Bitter cold of night, I can feel your breath
A shiver and your ready for your battle with my death
I'll fight you in any arena, or at the edge of town
Any where I chose I can cut you down
I saw the samaria at the end of the waisted street
He was as quite as a mouse at looking back up at me
He came closer, cold steel in his hand
I ran to the distance, afraid to join the clan
the samaria starts his chase and bellows out to me
"stop your running yellow man, I'll do it quick and clean"
Answers: "I'm silent in the dark" the samaria said
"I'll sneak up behind you, and chop off your head
I understand your movements and hear what you say
If you can see me, it's too late to pray"
I wouldn't travel alone at night, only with a friend
I'm coming to take you down and to bring you in
I can stealth my way up to your chest, hit you with my knife
I'm the one who choses if you keep your life
When I come to kill you, don't start to weep
I am able to kill you even when you sleep
Bitter cold of night, I can feel your breath
A shiver and your ready for your battle with my death
I'll fight you in any arena, or at the edge of town
Any where I chose I can cut you down
I saw the samaria at the end of the waisted street
He was as quite as a mouse at looking back up at me
He came closer, cold steel in his hand
I ran to the distance, afraid to join the clan
the samaria starts his chase and bellows out to me
"stop your running yellow man, I'll do it quick and clean"
its cool but the words - they dont affect me - try usng thesaurus for more sophisticated words , it adds some tension and use more descrptions,this is too quick and rigid buts its great like like 'cut you down'
Seems like you are an assassin ninja? Well, never mind, it says samurai, but that's the impression I got. Pretty good, I can't even rhyme for (insert desired word)!!!!