What do you think of the song i wrote?!


Question: hey! i'm not some depressed teen or something but this phrase does come once in a while in our lives. so what do you think of this song

" still the same"

i knew nothing would change
and it's going still the same
life is still a pain
it's going still the same

anger, frustation
all coming my way
just waiting for a beautiful day

hoping for the days to change
again things going strange

why should i take all this sh it?
why should i always be pissed?
why should i always be victimized?

i'm broken inside
a long ago i died
a soul-less life
is what i survive

nightmares haunted me
everyday, everynight
sleepless nights
having sleepless nights

when i close my eyes
i see blue skies
i see sunshine
i see silverline

but, when i open my eyes
everything dies
sunshine fades
blue sky is dead

nothing changed
been the same
still been pain
going still the same (going still the same)


Answers: hey! i'm not some depressed teen or something but this phrase does come once in a while in our lives. so what do you think of this song

" still the same"

i knew nothing would change
and it's going still the same
life is still a pain
it's going still the same

anger, frustation
all coming my way
just waiting for a beautiful day

hoping for the days to change
again things going strange

why should i take all this sh it?
why should i always be pissed?
why should i always be victimized?

i'm broken inside
a long ago i died
a soul-less life
is what i survive

nightmares haunted me
everyday, everynight
sleepless nights
having sleepless nights

when i close my eyes
i see blue skies
i see sunshine
i see silverline

but, when i open my eyes
everything dies
sunshine fades
blue sky is dead

nothing changed
been the same
still been pain
going still the same (going still the same)

wooooow!!!its beautiful!!!!!
i looove it,keep writing more and more and 1 day,you'll be the leader of the all the song writers,even timabaland!
ur song is just MORE than awesome!!!
i m inspired!

whoa! way too intense. seriously. nobody wants to listen to depressing songs like this. why dont' you try some happy lyrics? :)

Pretty generic and moody.

No.

Very generic. Sorry :[
Grab a thesaurus and go back to the drawing board.
And don't cuss in songs. There just isn't a reason to.. I can never say that enough.

song for gays



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