Okay...I'm writing this song and I need some help...?!
Question: It goes like this:
Verse 1
Your Smile
Makes me feel like dancing
Your laugh
Is like music to my ears
I love the way we talk
Until there's no more secrets
Bridge
I hear your face and my heart stops
I see your face and think about
The moment right before me
Chorus
Moments are the times I cherish most
Moments are the only things that keep me moving on
Moments keep me up at night and wake me in the morning
And when those moments are spent with you
The moment lives on
So the second verse goes on much the same and then after the second time you sing the chorus it goes into this thingy:
I can feel your love
.....
I need something to go in after 'I can feel your love' that has much the same beat or syllabals. (sp?)
Answers: It goes like this:
Verse 1
Your Smile
Makes me feel like dancing
Your laugh
Is like music to my ears
I love the way we talk
Until there's no more secrets
Bridge
I hear your face and my heart stops
I see your face and think about
The moment right before me
Chorus
Moments are the times I cherish most
Moments are the only things that keep me moving on
Moments keep me up at night and wake me in the morning
And when those moments are spent with you
The moment lives on
So the second verse goes on much the same and then after the second time you sing the chorus it goes into this thingy:
I can feel your love
.....
I need something to go in after 'I can feel your love' that has much the same beat or syllabals. (sp?)
i can feel your love
even when your not around
every time i think of you my
feet leave the ground
when i see the sky
i think of my feelings for you
anything you ask i will do
you sing like a dove.
that is, if a dove sang
i'm sure it would sound beautiful.
Whenever I see you
I get weak in the knees.
My heart beat gets fast
Like it`s going to seize.
I can`t find the words
To say how I feel.
But my actions will show
My intentions are real.
I hope this will help you find the words you need to finish your song. So far you are doing good and I hope this is what you are looking for.
First verse of bridge. I hear your face and my heart stops. It should be, I feel your face and my heart stops. Then after, I can feel your love, feel your love, I can feel your love at this moment and every day. One more thing, Change the word until to til. It makes it flow better. I love the way we talk, til there's no more secrets. In song writing it's ok to use slang words. A song has to flow, and yours does, except for this word until. Your song has good structure and story. I'm retired and no longer write sense my dad past away. We wrote many song together. When you get this song finished, Mail it to yourself by registered mail for protection. Then apply for a copy write.