Poem?Song?English HELP!!!!!?!
Question: I Worte a thing like a song or a poem .I want to send that as a gift to my gf ,but my English is not that great . I need help.
You do not need to understand what i mean ,just change it in your way which you think it should be . Thank you very much .
I wanna to know,how long does the shootstar flow?
It is beautiful,is it worth to follow.The flower that in the dark sky ,it has been opening behind u .It is worth for u.So ,my soul,is running about madly from the dusk to the dawn.Vivivovo,I love u .i hope i could go back ,although , i am still faraway from u .I hope i could make a vom to the god that is he loves u .His name is the same as me.You might be hurt sorely ,u should go out without everybody.
It just does not make sense ,coz i am really falling in love with u .Remember ,everyday or night ,i mean we are in the different world .Do u remember the first time i said love u?
Remember ,everyday or night ,have u ever wondered why i am become so cute ,Coz of u .
Answers: I Worte a thing like a song or a poem .I want to send that as a gift to my gf ,but my English is not that great . I need help.
You do not need to understand what i mean ,just change it in your way which you think it should be . Thank you very much .
I wanna to know,how long does the shootstar flow?
It is beautiful,is it worth to follow.The flower that in the dark sky ,it has been opening behind u .It is worth for u.So ,my soul,is running about madly from the dusk to the dawn.Vivivovo,I love u .i hope i could go back ,although , i am still faraway from u .I hope i could make a vom to the god that is he loves u .His name is the same as me.You might be hurt sorely ,u should go out without everybody.
It just does not make sense ,coz i am really falling in love with u .Remember ,everyday or night ,i mean we are in the different world .Do u remember the first time i said love u?
Remember ,everyday or night ,have u ever wondered why i am become so cute ,Coz of u .
Hope this helps. I have changed a few words. Good luck.
I wanna to know, how long does a shooting-star flow?
It is beautiful, but is it worth to follow?
The flower in the dark sky, has opened up behind u,
But only half as pretty as u?
My soul, is running truly , from dusk til dawn,
Vivivovo,I love u, and cannot move on.
I hope I can go back, although, I am still faraway from u.
I hope I could make a vom to the god, that is he loves u.
His name is the same as me, you might be hurt sorely,
And u feel u should go out without everybody.
It just does not make sense ,coz i am really falling in love.
Everyday and night, we are in the different world.
Do u remember the first time i said love u?
Everyday and night ,have u ever wondered why i am become so cute...
Coz of u .
Faraway, I hope I cand be right beside u, under the shooting-star.
Tell me u do love me too.
No one feels the way I do, I cannot wait to go back home.
Can u say, you want me home, to travel such a distance?
But the decision is up to you, to decide about our love?
Don't change it!! It may not be in perfect English but the fact you wrote it will mean more than anything.Lucky gf! x