What do you think of my song? It's pretty rough?!
Question: Thats the start the middle and the end. Why don't you come along my friend. Jump on and have some good times. Hang around and make some rhymes. Remember how nothing last. Make some song about our past.
The pain you feel it's all to reel. It all may suck but you gotta the best the best the best of it....oh
Life was good when we were young. Now it seems like it's all no fun. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. So loosen up and try to enjoy. We'll make the best of all we can. So will you jump on my friend.
The pain you fell it's all to reel. It all may suck but you gotta be making the best the best the best you can...oh.
Please comment.
Answers: Thats the start the middle and the end. Why don't you come along my friend. Jump on and have some good times. Hang around and make some rhymes. Remember how nothing last. Make some song about our past.
The pain you feel it's all to reel. It all may suck but you gotta the best the best the best of it....oh
Life was good when we were young. Now it seems like it's all no fun. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. So loosen up and try to enjoy. We'll make the best of all we can. So will you jump on my friend.
The pain you fell it's all to reel. It all may suck but you gotta be making the best the best the best you can...oh.
Please comment.
thats pretty good. i am a writer myself actually and i think it is good. keep writing more!! can u sing to? that would be awesome! keep pursuing your dreams! and if you make it, thank me for liking your song! no no lol lol jkjkjk
I hope you willl wirte more. Post them if you do!!! \
=] luckyyduckeyy12 =]
well it's not going to win an award that's for sure
not very original.
i like it a lot! i also like The Shining too, so that quote in there made it rad. the song it awesome.
its not bad!
OMG,I love IT!!if it was on cd i would buy it!........or 10!
It's really good. It's really hard for me to write songs, and I'm not very good at it. So for you to be able to write this...as WELL as the fact you're a guy!! *WOW* lol j/k Anyway, keep writing!
way to much time on your hands.