How's my verse(Yay Area vs. Evil Conscience)?!?!?!
Question: Evil’s energy is straight up pathetic;
My energy is doubled out like its kinetic;
Conscience don’t u know yo career I will end it;
Me killing whack emcees is like da new epidemic;
My rhymes is fast accelerated like velocity;
& which also means my mass is elevated so u can’t toss me;
Evil Conscience is trapped sticky cuz I spit fluid like Viscosity;
U sayin’ yo style is dope is like a dumb theory or a fraud Philosophy;
Spit Squadron is brainless;
RT is dangerous;
Ya’ll punchlines is painless;
We so sick we make dudes gangrenous;
My rhymes so mortal it’s one of the factors of human overexploitation;
My portable styles slay all these Squadron members over expurgation;
U really don’t know who you facing;
I cause SS habitat Fragmentation; Tear down ya whole crew creations;
Into small magnified crumbs I’m just amazing;
U wanna bring yo squads record up;
U thought u gonna improve by getting checkered up;
Answers: Evil’s energy is straight up pathetic;
My energy is doubled out like its kinetic;
Conscience don’t u know yo career I will end it;
Me killing whack emcees is like da new epidemic;
My rhymes is fast accelerated like velocity;
& which also means my mass is elevated so u can’t toss me;
Evil Conscience is trapped sticky cuz I spit fluid like Viscosity;
U sayin’ yo style is dope is like a dumb theory or a fraud Philosophy;
Spit Squadron is brainless;
RT is dangerous;
Ya’ll punchlines is painless;
We so sick we make dudes gangrenous;
My rhymes so mortal it’s one of the factors of human overexploitation;
My portable styles slay all these Squadron members over expurgation;
U really don’t know who you facing;
I cause SS habitat Fragmentation; Tear down ya whole crew creations;
Into small magnified crumbs I’m just amazing;
U wanna bring yo squads record up;
U thought u gonna improve by getting checkered up;
haha at that ether bottle. Sorry but that was page and cage. Which is exactly why you're gonna win. blah blah blah RT is better blah blah blah SS is not blah blah blah i'm better blah blah blah evil is crap blah blah. Honestly i'm not being a twat for no reason. Trust me when i say i've been voting on battles for a year and a half now, i know what makes a good verse. From what i've seen from you and HNIC, your verses are generic, thats not taking away from them being dope, its saying that you could use that verse you just did against me, just put my name where evils name is. You need personals to really attack your opponent. And i don't see any.
And correct me if i'm wrong but isn't viscosity a measure of flow? How can you 'spit' viscosity?
But i like your flow, its coherent, just don't hype yourself up too much, focus on your opponent, hyping yourself up = filler. And filler doesn't win battles.
EDIT: Yeah i know its hard, but you can flip his name, you can flip stupid sh*t he says, you can flip stupid sh*t he does, you can flip who he likes, who he dislikes, what his avatar looks like etc etc. Just something that says you didn't write this verse three months ago for someone else. But i looked at his verse...you had the harder punches.
who's gonna post the vote?
"& u lied Evil saying u goin 2 do the dishes;
U went 2 yo room & asked yo imaginary genie 4 a few wishes;"
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Yo..that waz hot! U got it goin on babe!
not bad...
not great...
DAMN! that was sick...did Evil put up his verse yet?
that was good, love it when artist have expanded vocabulary