How does my lyrics sound so far...?!
Question: The best of me
by me
Now that we all said were done. I cant believe u were the one to bring me up and drop me down. It left me mad and out of place. I don’t know what to say cause you were the best of me.
I don’t know why were leaving. When we should be holding on.
Answers: The best of me
by me
Now that we all said were done. I cant believe u were the one to bring me up and drop me down. It left me mad and out of place. I don’t know what to say cause you were the best of me.
I don’t know why were leaving. When we should be holding on.
Not a bad start. Try the music/lyrics discussion forum in sources. What style of music is it going to be?
Here's my take:
Now that we've both said we're done,
I cant believe you were the one
to bring me up and let me down.
It left me mad and out of place. <-- needs something else
I don’t know what to say
because you were the best of me.
I don’t know why we're leaving
when we should be holding on.
hey, umm. its a good song, but i would change the title, cause there's a song by Sherwood (look them up on myspace or someplace) called The Best of Me.
ok
It is acutally a pretty good song except you should change the title and the words a little. Sorry if that hurt you.