What do think of my song?!


Question: I just wrote this song, what do you think..give me lots of answers, more than 10

More than just a guy too me...

Chorus:
He walked up to me, he found out my name
I cant begin, to explain
This guy is more than just a guy to me

Verse1:
He's nice and he's cool
he goes to my school,
he has a big heart this is just, the, start

Most guys are mean,
most guys are cruel
They come and they go
and drool over you

Chorus:
He walked up to me, he found out my name
I cant begin, to explain
This guy is more than just a guy to me

Verse2:
This guy he is funny
This guy makes me laugh
That's a good sign
From a guy, like, that

One day this guy
he came up to me,
said "Hey, girl,
you ain't the one, now leave"

Verse3:
I knew what he meant
My world came crashing down
This guy he is mean
This guy he is cruel

I cant belive I felt for a
guy
like
you

I never really was good at writing songs and this is one of my first, tell me what you really think and please tell me if you would add or change anything..


Answers: I just wrote this song, what do you think..give me lots of answers, more than 10

More than just a guy too me...

Chorus:
He walked up to me, he found out my name
I cant begin, to explain
This guy is more than just a guy to me

Verse1:
He's nice and he's cool
he goes to my school,
he has a big heart this is just, the, start

Most guys are mean,
most guys are cruel
They come and they go
and drool over you

Chorus:
He walked up to me, he found out my name
I cant begin, to explain
This guy is more than just a guy to me

Verse2:
This guy he is funny
This guy makes me laugh
That's a good sign
From a guy, like, that

One day this guy
he came up to me,
said "Hey, girl,
you ain't the one, now leave"

Verse3:
I knew what he meant
My world came crashing down
This guy he is mean
This guy he is cruel

I cant belive I felt for a
guy
like
you

I never really was good at writing songs and this is one of my first, tell me what you really think and please tell me if you would add or change anything..

good song, best stuff comes from personnel experience,
when you feel low. Don't change it, it's done. Write another
one. Practice your craft, from concept, to delivery, not just
putting polish on the delivery.Get it down while you feel it,
keep it, if you have to change it, keep the original.
write on girl!

hmm i guess not bad
but is this song like about a guy's attitude..?

I think it's a really neat composition.. I am sorry but I can't answer that question fully though... I mean, I don't know the tune of it.. I think any song can be good with the right catchy tune.. I mean lots of the songs they have out there have really crappy lyrics but are famous because they have a good vibe.. Well, I think it was really good, though.. I hope you did a good part with the tunes as well. Good Luck!

well its a good song, but i am assuming your pretty young so this one probably wouldn't be taken very seroiusly with the references to school, but you definately should pursue this, and keep on writing! You have a good start and its awesome for a first song!



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