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Question: It’s My Fault
When I saw your lifeless body
Tears are dripping from my eyes… screams of sadness we cry
You’re everything to me… you’re everything [2x] to me
The feud have torn my heart in two with a knife tried to kill the love ones
And the death of the children took mine pride as darkness covering the Earth
All I know is happiness can’t be replace
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
As I lied down
While I’m sleeping
I know Death will grab hold of my soul
And trying to remove from my body
Because I done something wrong
I thought the feud will not destroy my precious one
But I’m wrong
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
When I awake from my sleep
I thought you’re alive
But it’s just a dream
Still you will haunt my soul forever
Because of my stupid mistakes
I tried to forget you
But I can’t
Tried to think a happy memory
With you
But as I think about it
Knowing I’ll cry the future
Cause you not here
Nothing but misery
As it engulfing my heart
Like someone is coloring my heart red to black
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
It’s not your fault
It’s mine
Can you ever forgive me?
Please don’t hate me…forever…
But mine mind said
You will…HATE ME FOREVER…
Pain of your death all I know is misery
Like chains holding me down
Holding me down, down, DOWN
To the bottomless pit of hell
In my mind blood drips from
Your eyes
A beautiful last goodbye
…its okay now, you can rest…
While I don’t have a eternal rest
Answers: It’s My Fault
When I saw your lifeless body
Tears are dripping from my eyes… screams of sadness we cry
You’re everything to me… you’re everything [2x] to me
The feud have torn my heart in two with a knife tried to kill the love ones
And the death of the children took mine pride as darkness covering the Earth
All I know is happiness can’t be replace
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
As I lied down
While I’m sleeping
I know Death will grab hold of my soul
And trying to remove from my body
Because I done something wrong
I thought the feud will not destroy my precious one
But I’m wrong
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
When I awake from my sleep
I thought you’re alive
But it’s just a dream
Still you will haunt my soul forever
Because of my stupid mistakes
I tried to forget you
But I can’t
Tried to think a happy memory
With you
But as I think about it
Knowing I’ll cry the future
Cause you not here
Nothing but misery
As it engulfing my heart
Like someone is coloring my heart red to black
Emptiness has darkened my eyes
As I hopelessly beg for my life to end
…tell me why…
Why you have to do this
I wish I could see you again
It’s not your fault
It’s mine
Can you ever forgive me?
Please don’t hate me…forever…
But mine mind said
You will…HATE ME FOREVER…
Pain of your death all I know is misery
Like chains holding me down
Holding me down, down, DOWN
To the bottomless pit of hell
In my mind blood drips from
Your eyes
A beautiful last goodbye
…its okay now, you can rest…
While I don’t have a eternal rest
overall it is a good song. you have good description even if it is a little graphic. you can tell you put some thought into it. it is definitly deppressing. but it has potential. im also sorry if anything that horrible happened in your life to make you write this.
Man , I'm not saying it's bad but that would depress an Emo kid
emo much? not the best, could use some happyness
wow it is good!! it has A LOT of emotion in it... you put alot of heart in this for sure
wow thats really depressing...its okay i wouldnt say good it needs revision but it has good ideas...