Attention: Evil, IMTHEMAN, Yay Area, Primtime, Ecobar...?!
Question: This is my freestyle aptly named: Drunk Thoughts....
Now remember, I'm old school, so read it and feel and then share your thoughts. I'm gonna post it to my blog.
Beep, Beep, Who put the genie back to sleep, I'm drinking and driving on my phone counting sheep; doing about a buck passing state police, blue lights just went on, here they come after me. I'm just trying to get home, it's been a long day. Made a wrong turn, in the middle of GA. Had to get on twenty, just to find a new way to the crib, to get some sleep, hope it ends without this man doing a bid. Been thinking about the past, and all the things I done did. Contemplating kharma catching up to the kid. Drinking and I'm driving, and I'm swerving and I winding thru the traffic on the highway, and the lights I pass are blinding. I can't see more than two hundred feet, turn the high beams on, concentrate visually. Where was I at, oh yeah, reflecting on the past. Dumb mistakes I made, riches I could have had.
Answers: This is my freestyle aptly named: Drunk Thoughts....
Now remember, I'm old school, so read it and feel and then share your thoughts. I'm gonna post it to my blog.
Beep, Beep, Who put the genie back to sleep, I'm drinking and driving on my phone counting sheep; doing about a buck passing state police, blue lights just went on, here they come after me. I'm just trying to get home, it's been a long day. Made a wrong turn, in the middle of GA. Had to get on twenty, just to find a new way to the crib, to get some sleep, hope it ends without this man doing a bid. Been thinking about the past, and all the things I done did. Contemplating kharma catching up to the kid. Drinking and I'm driving, and I'm swerving and I winding thru the traffic on the highway, and the lights I pass are blinding. I can't see more than two hundred feet, turn the high beams on, concentrate visually. Where was I at, oh yeah, reflecting on the past. Dumb mistakes I made, riches I could have had.
Honestly that looks like a huge essay, format it and i'll give you honest critique. I dont care if my name is not evil, imtheman, yay area, primtime or escobar.
homie, this is the type stuff you gotta record...it's not built for this type s hits that's why everything I do on here is one of these multi-spree freestyle s hits...record this and maybe it will be good..(however, I must say that the rhyme scheme from what I can tell is overall basic)
Record it and I'll see if it really is good..
wow thats a lot hope they judge it 4 ya
Looks like a basic rhyme scheme, yo kid I thought you was old school, ya gotta come harder than that...I mean Charlie check'em might use this as leverage.
It does sound a lil below Check em