Do you like my song?!
Question:
Do you like my song?
I love you
Verse 1:
The tears start rollin' in
As I think about him again
I don't wanna loose what we could have
but it's a daydream
some thing's are as plain as
just him and me
And I wonder,
Will we ever be more than friends?
And I also,
Want to know, will he be there 'til the end?
Chorus:
I just can't let him go
My brain's goin' through so many memories
but yet so slow
Does he know he means so much to me?
Does he feel the same way?
I think his friends can, but he can't see,
that I love him more and more each day.
more and more each day
Verse 2:
It's a secret I could never tell,
It's something I've never felt
I guess it's something that's too hard to explain
Does he know?
That I write songs for him, I can't shout out his name?
Does he know?
That I love him,
Does he care?
I wanna be with him 'til the end.
Should I share,
my love
ohh, my love
[chorus]
Verse 3:
I pray to God at night
That he will end up mine
But I think I know the truth
the walls are crashing down
I just want to say,"I love you"
but something's holdin' me back
His friends say he loves me,
but I don't know who to believe.
[chorus]
I guess it's time,
to let the sun shine.
and say these words,
that I held back,
it's time you know the truth.
Yeah, yeah, I love you.
[chorus] Additional Details
21 hours ago
I wrote it in 20 minutes. So if it's not that good I understand. I just want another oppinion. Thank you! Have a nice day! ?
21 hours ago
I am only 11, also. I only want oppinions. I don't wanna know how to make it better, because I can do that on my own. I am teaching myself guitar, so I already have music to put with it. Thank you! [again!] Have a nice day! ?
21 hours ago
It's kind-of a melody where it's not really fast, but not really slow. It's kinda in the middle.
Answers: 21 hours ago
I wrote it in 20 minutes. So if it's not that good I understand. I just want another oppinion. Thank you! Have a nice day! ?21 hours ago
I am only 11, also. I only want oppinions. I don't wanna know how to make it better, because I can do that on my own. I am teaching myself guitar, so I already have music to put with it. Thank you! [again!] Have a nice day! ?21 hours ago
It's kind-of a melody where it's not really fast, but not really slow. It's kinda in the middle. LOVE IT!!!!!
KEEP UP THE GOOS WORK!
GOOD SLEEP!! its good but wats yur melody??? get a life... sorry lol that was my brother's idea to write..
its alright.. work on the lyrics and 2 much ryhming and i love you... Wow, that is just amazing. i really like it. record the song and put it on youtube let us all hear it,who knows, maybe you can make ppl forget about that guy/girl who was defending britney spears. I really like the lyrics but I have to like the tune. Also the lyrics are quite deep but dont sing them unless they are true ok?
Still GREAT lyrics