Are these good lyrics?.....please change what you dont like in your answer and i!

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Are these good lyrics?.....please change what you dont like in your answer and i will give it the best answer!

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everyday i wake up, youre stuck in my head. so i cant go back to bed.....so i get up,get up, get up and write about you. nothing can truly tame the way i think about you...all day long, by writing a song. so i get up, get up, get up and write about you. all i want to do is sang a song for you. cause your emails gone and your phone # wrong. i cant even think to talk to you, i am just way to blue.....so i get up, get up, get up and dont think of you, well i guess i end up doing so, you are beginning to be real shallow.......all that comes to mind is to pray for you and keep it true between me and you . so i get up get up get up and i shout out shout out shout out, that it is all too true that i think I 've fallen in love with you.

Answers: Every day I wake up; thoughts of you in my head;
I toss and I turn as I lie on my bed;
So I get up, get up, and I write about you
I cannot tame the feelings which I swear are all true.
As soon as I get up I'm writing this song
The e-mail is closed and, your phone #'s wrong
All I want is to sing you a song from my heart
Please try to hear it before you depart
So I get up, get up and try not to see you
But the thoughts all race back and they make me feel blue.
So I pray for the love that was once you and me
and I hope that someday it will all come to be
So I get up, get up and I shout out, shout out
That I love you so much, for this dear, there's no doubt!! take out the email part and its all good Take out this line: cause your emails gone and your phone # wrong. It's okay, but it's not organized. You need to have verses and a chorus.

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