My first actual rap?!
Question:
My first actual rap?
THis is my first rap I"ve done that isn't a freestyle....
It's like an initial public offering, but I"m not a conglomerate, Wake up in the night, scared to sleep on death--even though death don't sleep, close my eyelids, though i'm still watching for death with both eyes, and though I keep my eyes open, death still keeps em shut.....thought's alway's on myeself, like some sort of egomaniac, my brain react, they say I "keep getting ahead, although my life keep fallin behind, and they say my life is gettin ahead, although I keep gettin behind...it's crazy like that, cat's gettin shot over some rhyme they spat, go crazy like animals when rabies attack, I go on a crazy attack like rabies, I'm the microphone slayer, still ain't a player (I just murk a lot), still ai'nt blue collar (I just work a lot)...Tha'st all i got for now...this was actually a freestyle..but i'm EXTREMELY bored, and what I meant was that it wasn't a freestyle type rap.... Additional Details
11 hours ago
I realize this is complete shite, but i'm so bored right now....
11 hours ago
I'ma go blaze that Blu and exile album..IF YOU HAVENT HEARD IT YET, IT'S ILL!!!
11 hours ago
you would not believe how bored I am..right now yay...
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no yay, I'm in college, no class tomorrow....I'm one of those people that's seemingly always up....
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I"m up every day from like 7 A.M. to like 2 A.M.
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yea, I'm not really one of those people that gets a lot of sleep...(I'm always up.)_
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IDK, Havent heard anything back from HNIC, but Ithugs availible at 10-10:30 EST, I'm available whenever, I don't know bout anyone else though....
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BTW, I Get no sleep cuz sleep akin to your last breath, not only that, but sleep is the cousin of death, if you down with the reaper, I guess sleeps OK, but If not, I'ma turn on Rakim and "check out my DJ"...hahaha...
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our rapping roster stands at:
me,
IMTHEMAN
QWERTY...
AIM's not going to battle, and I'm not going to send one of our weed carriers to this one...so I guess we'll just be mismatched in numbers...
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oh yea, and IThug..
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lmfao AIM....I never took up freestyling until about June/july, and this really is my first "non freestyle" type rhyme....BTW, do you guy's keep a rhyme book? (or write them down), cuz I never do....
11 hours ago
EVERYTHING I do on here is off the dome..no written, I think that being able to do it off my head will make me better at rapping....
11 hours ago
good Idea,I'm go to bed as well....
Answers: 11 hours ago
I realize this is complete shite, but i'm so bored right now....11 hours ago
I'ma go blaze that Blu and exile album..IF YOU HAVENT HEARD IT YET, IT'S ILL!!!11 hours ago
you would not believe how bored I am..right now yay...11 hours ago
no yay, I'm in college, no class tomorrow....I'm one of those people that's seemingly always up....11 hours ago
I"m up every day from like 7 A.M. to like 2 A.M.11 hours ago
yea, I'm not really one of those people that gets a lot of sleep...(I'm always up.)_11 hours ago
IDK, Havent heard anything back from HNIC, but Ithugs availible at 10-10:30 EST, I'm available whenever, I don't know bout anyone else though....11 hours ago
BTW, I Get no sleep cuz sleep akin to your last breath, not only that, but sleep is the cousin of death, if you down with the reaper, I guess sleeps OK, but If not, I'ma turn on Rakim and "check out my DJ"...hahaha...11 hours ago
our rapping roster stands at:
me,
IMTHEMAN
QWERTY...
AIM's not going to battle, and I'm not going to send one of our weed carriers to this one...so I guess we'll just be mismatched in numbers...11 hours ago
oh yea, and IThug..11 hours ago
lmfao AIM....I never took up freestyling until about June/july, and this really is my first "non freestyle" type rhyme....BTW, do you guy's keep a rhyme book? (or write them down), cuz I never do....11 hours ago
EVERYTHING I do on here is off the dome..no written, I think that being able to do it off my head will make me better at rapping....11 hours ago
good Idea,I'm go to bed as well.... Man. I see you improved a lot then. It wasn't ba though but I can tell you improved. I wish I still had my first actaul rap. I threw that weak stuff away.lol.
Man y don't u go 2 sleep. I was finna go 2 sleep but I was hungry so I gotta bite. Don't you have school 2morrow?lol. I do 2 tho.
Dayum. U gets no sleep.
Alright lets do a little pre-battle or somethin' goin'.lol.
Eivl Conscience gets no sleep;
he must have 2 much beef;
Either that or he on the computer watchin' gay porn beatin' his meat;
Lol. Just joking. Hay I'm bored too though.
When we start this Squadron vs. Terrorists battle thing 2morrow?
O do u guys have any other new recruits? I think we only have like HNIC, FredMS, Stef, Escobar & I think thats it. iono. I'm available anytime like after 5 or so. (Pacific)
Okay u wanna do like Wildin' out Freestyles huh?
Yo; yo worplay game is lame; U needs 2 quit
I overdose u wit my lyrical grain of Cain;
Come out my anus; which means u s-h i t
HA.
I keep a rhymebook. Freestyling isn't really my thing I'm more of a lyricist; U can probably tell in the lyrics in my battles becuase I don't put out much punchlines really. I just do this battling online stuff 4 fun. I like writing songs better.
Datz cool. I type off the dome one here too, but I'm better if I can take my time. But I holla at ya'll lata Gotta go 2 sleep Peace!!! I thought you were talkin about your first rap *EVER* lol I know I said I aint rappin on here no more (and I'm stickin to that) but I just had to type this up cuz now its all I can think about... This is the first rap I ever made, I was prolly 9 or 10 years old... **WAY BACK** when I was rockin the fade with a part and dressed nasty as hell... anyways here it goes:
I pulled out my .45 Captain Jack/
I tried to shoot a lady all dressed in black/
she pulled out a gun/
shot me in the bun/
I fell down screaming "what has she done?"/
then I took my .45 shot her in the mouth/
then she screamed, "what you doin? I aint from the south!"
then she ran squeaking like a stupid little mouse/
and called ryder to buy a new house/
moved to houston where it was nice clean/
then i came down there i was really mean/
i took my .45 i shot her again/
then she called the cops on me, and she aint my friend/
i went to jail, for 15 yrs/
where i couldn't drink no more beers/
i busted out, and escaped with you/
and then we moved down, to Timbuktu/
they tried to get us but we went to France/
where we could do our favorite dance/
and then I'd bust out doin that dancin like Carlton and Will did on Fresh Prince and hum the song "Apache" Your words are strong and i can never be you. Sorry my words are never that strong. I like to read. And school is my way. Not everyone can be a star. I like to work and feel like I can do something for me. Being left alone with out nothing with a child. Believe me I might be blue collar, but it me from things that are worst. I'm proud that you found your strenghten, but this mine. An I'm no star. ha cant hate on that. keep freestyling.. Yeah we in the building....
and all the stuff I do on here is off the top like a edge up....and I haven't used any of the verses in the off-line world...I got bars for days so this just gets my lyrical game even sharper than it already is....rhyming really is my life....that and working.....stupid capitalism....