What Do You Think Of This Song I Just Wrote?!?!
Question:
What Do You Think Of This Song I Just Wrote?!?
I hated school
I loved to study
The only problem
Was that they made fun of my body
They called me fat
They called me chubby
I knew I was
But they didn’t have to shove it in my face
Oh dear grace
Give me patience to survive
But can’t they see
CHORUS:
That we’re all the same
We come in different sizes and shapes and colors
This shouldn’t be a game that we’re fighting to win
This should be a place were we can all join in and
Dance
Dance until the sun comes up and the moon goes down
Immigration
They’re all over our streets
Can’t they see?
That we have the right to walk on our feet
Without being scared
Of getting caught on the streets
Cause we have no papers
CHORUS
People are races just because of the color
Some are white and some are darker
But can’t they see that God sees us all the same
This shouldn’t be a game
CHORUS X2
Answers: Very interesting... It made me laugh. If that was your intention. lol. Sucks. Been done too many times. its ok it made me laugh I have to agree with the first answer. What was your intention for this song?
Your first verse sounds country. no, no, and sharon says no That's funny!!