What Do You Think About This Song Written By Me?!?!


Question:

What Do You Think About This Song Written By Me?!?


Please tell me what you think about the following song I wrote?:
You asked me to the prom
And I said I couldn’t go
Then you asked her and her and they also
Turned you down
If you would only know
That I’m dying to hold your hands and kiss your lips
But I’m sorry
I got to go
If you would only know
That me and her and her too are

CHORUS:
Living the double life
And it’s hard
And you don’t know it
But you’ll understand someday
When I decide to tell you that
We got to go
I’ll see you some day
I got to go upstage now
I got to go
I got to put my make up on and perform
But when the sun goes up
I’m back to my normal life


Hello
I’m back
How did it go?
I hope you know
I hope that someday you’ll understand
Your life might not be the same
But what you don’t know is that
I got all the fame

CHORUS 2X

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16 hours ago
This one is for KiKi Morgan I didn't copy the song from Hannah Montanait's just that I started to think about how my life would be if I was famous and that's what inspired this song.


Answers: 16 hours ago
This one is for KiKi Morgan I didn't copy the song from Hannah Montanait's just that I started to think about how my life would be if I was famous and that's what inspired this song. It's not bad. What usually makes a song lyric stick in your ear is the melody. Keep writing and you will get better and better everytime. Good luck! It sounds like you kind of copied the idea from Hannah Montana, like the person doesn't know that the girl is really famous. Otherwise, it was pretty good. It's good. keep up the good work1!

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