What do you think of this song? I wrote more now.?!

What do you think of this song? I wrote more now.?

i wrote this song about growing up with alchoholic parents. Its just the start of it. Tell me what you think.btw i am only 13 so dont expect great.
Verse 1- slow
I was there on the night, you got into your fight. The scars they wont heal, as time passes, but they wil let us remember the life that we had. We put our cards on the table, as we were so unable, to distinguish the lies, from the truth in your eyes. So tell me how could i know, when i was seven years old and im drowning in fear because your never here. You always left me alone, when i was most vulnerable, yeah. Well how did it feel, when i left you alone. And you cried out my name, into the old telephone.And what is it like to sit in prison all day and night, you've been in there so long, so you can pay for your wrongs. And as i watch you fade, I wonder if you'll ever be the same.
Refrain-faster.
I hope you sit and cry, and ask yourself why,why.Why you kept me under wraps, for 13 years,u cant top that.

Wow, you can write! You seriously have a gift. I like how emotional it is. You can really feel your pain. Two thumbs up, dude. If you turned that into a song, yup, I'd buy it! Two thumbs up!