Is this third song I wrote good too?!
Question:
Is this third song I wrote good too?
Title: I Hate One Night Stands
Girl I wish you had knew,
That I Really Love You.
And I needed you to know,
What I decided long ago.
Girl,I hate one night stands.
Need a relationship to last.
I just want this to be right.
Don,t want to be together for just one night.
Need to get to know you more.
Please don't walk out that door.Please don't walk away from me.
I want you and me to be happy.
Girl,I hate one night stands.
Need a relationship to last.
I just want this to be right.
Don,t want to be together for just one night.
(Intermission)
It's good that you understand,
That I want to be your man.
Now that it's you and me,
We're together happily.
Girl,I hate one night stands.
Need a relationship to last.
I just want this to be right.
Don,t want to be together for just one night.
Answers:
Wow, that is really good. I think it was better than your other song that you wrote. You could be a professional. You should get an album out. I would buy it. TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!