Do you like this song i wrote about child abuse?!

Do you like this song i wrote about child abuse?

I dont like it.Im 13 btw.
Tell Me The Reason

Verse 1
Stick and stones, will break her bones.
And your words will always hurt her.
All because you couldn’t keep yourself sober,
She will always hate that in you.
You punish your daughter, and hurt her in ways,
That you can never take back and she will never be the same.

Refrain
Tell me the reason for what I have seen,
Tell me the reason for why you are so keen,
To Beat the girl, she does nothing right.
Beat the girl, cuz she stayed out last night.
Treat her like she’s dirt, Treat her like she’s even less than that.
I don’t understand why, you cant be a man, boy.
Just tell me the reason.

Verse 2
Your daughter’s crying, on the side of the road.
How could you leave her there, she’s only 13 years old.
You can see the fire in her eyes, but she’s so hypnotized,
By the trauma and fear, its as though, shes not even here.
Refrain.
Tell me what you think.

1 week ago
Ok i was never abused, so idk if it is accurate, and i am only 13 so its probably not great.

Well sweetie, some little girl is going to read this and you're going to be her inspiration....or maybe an abuser will read this and it'll open their eyes to what their child is feeling as they are beating them....I think the song is very meaningful and put together well. Could use some tweeks here and there as far as wording but as I said, it's meaningful and to someone, it's the words that they couldn't speak themself.