Are these good lyrics???!
Question:
Are these good lyrics???
love is good time pass bye gotta lover by my side no i loved you till the day pass me bye but know one cut me through with all the times ive needed help i thought you were the one lets go have that fun we really thought we had and all iv realised is times so slow i really thought about iiiiiiiiiit but the time aint passin by
Answers:
It's a great start! I bet it sounds even better when you sing it, doesn't it?
They say the best songs have less than 100 words and a lot of repetition so that people can easily remember the words.
If it helps, my absolute favorite songwriting book is : The Secrets of Successful Songwriting by by Carl E., Jr. Bolte
also the Craft of Lyric Writing by Sheila Davis.
Keep it up...maybe we can hear it on the radio someday!
I wish you the best of success!