What do you think?!
Question:
What do you think?
this is a song i wrote: I was sittin on my front porch swing, thinkin bout what you said to me, how I wish i could take lost times back, i'm sorry for the pain i caused you, i wanna make it all better, i wanna be the one you wanna talk to about, in a good way. Forgive me if i overthink the obvious. I love you and truth is I need you in my life, *chourus* don't wanna push you away, cause when I say goodbye i want you to cry because you're sad, ooohhh, I want you to see me the way that i see you. *chorus* I want you to remember me for my good deeds for my caring nature. I don't want you to let me go, but first I gotta show you that, I love you and I need you in my life, I can't say that I don't care if you walk away. Truth is I do and baby i'm gonna show you that I *Chorus* Ohh please let me show you the better me. sittin on my front porch swing thinking about what to do to gain you back.
Additional Details1 week ago
no i didn't copy someone else's song.
1 week ago
i'm making longer, this is just what i have so far...
Answers:
I like it alot. I love the idea about the front porch swing. it could maybe be a little longer bit it depends on the tune