I wrote this poem, tell me what you think?!
Question:
I wrote this poem, tell me what you think?
what can i do to improve it? whats wrong with it? any suggestions?
what should i call it?
i have more i want to add still, maybe
(im re asking this question in a diffrent section)
(untitlied)
it's like i have this life
where you barley exsist
but there are these times
when stupid memorys persist
They haunt me at the movies
and when i hear that song
by the plain white t's
for a moment i feel wrong
out of place,
sweet memories existed
left a bad taste
Answers:
it's so good!!! Check your spelling and maybe you should call it "Memories" or something...or just think about what this poem truly means to you and the story behind it and get a title from that...