My friend wrote a song.?!

My friend wrote a song.?

She's young and this is her first song she's ever written. Any good you think? Any ideas to help her?

It's time to move on
From the sound proof room we're in
Making brand new friends, once again
Yeah, yeah, yeah
Collected are the thoughts you once had
Of memories that are there, forever
Foreverrrrrrr.

You don't have any idea
Captured thoughts that are inside
Just let go, give me a break tonight
Tonight..

Letting go
Is harder than said.
Breaking off
Is the worst thought in my head
Going through this stuff that makes no sense to me
Getting rid of all captivity
Leaving it all behind tonight

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She hasn't finished it yet. But I thought it was pretty good. What do you think?

1 week ago
She's learning how to play the guitar, so that might help with the songs. She's only 14.

wow these are good! she should totally record it with the guitar and everything and see how it turns out.