What u think bout this rap?!
Question:
What u think bout this rap?
jus tell me what u think n give me some tips n advice thanks n advance
im havin minor difficulties spittin this out my mouth
havin minior difficulties wat should i b writin about
first seldom rhymes i was doin okay
now my talents gettin thrown away
n i cant considor a single thing to say
i rap about my life n the war today
but i dont think i can settle the score today
i wake up n visualize what should i speak
im hypnotized n my words r weak
i m mezmerized by this rappin game
cant even illusion havin rappin fame
everything i say sounds exactly the same
cause my lyrics r sleek guess im the 1 to blame
n i keep spittin out the same s*it
dont know how to prevent n get past it
can someone help so it wont b everlastin
i hate to ask but i b askin
Answers:
nah i think its good keep on working at it coz ull get far!
this is my mc!
look at me im the lyrical G got a cousin called crafty cant mc like the s.o.v thats just me lyrical G!trust you rude girl dont wanna mess dont get lairy bright coz girls like me dont wanna fight and once i start its not a pretty site ill punch u and even bite so dont coz mess wid me ill hit you over the head wid a b.a.t yer thats just me lyrical G